the night fell on the yard as
it filled a scenery on your sight
when time was floating near
your visage, you was alone
true. into your anatomy
the time breezed into ribs' cells
then unto your mind and brought
every memory out from you
from cubes inside your eyes
to the deepest curve in ears
up to the sky who always
receive every blue, isn't it?
and it was you beyond
this poem, watching the time
passed by and suddenly
out of nowhere felt so lonely
17 July 2008
ini cuma sketsa, eh puisi Steven Kurniawan
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Steven Kurniawan dilahirkan pada tanggal 25 Februari 1988 di Jakarta. Menghabiskan waktu sekolahnya di Sekolah Damai, Jakarta, dari TK hingga SMA, kemudian melanjutkan ke Kelas Fondasi Seni Rupa selama 1 tahun di Singapura. Semasa SMA, ia pernah memenangkan lomba analisis novel sastra intrasekolah dalam rangka Bulan Bahasa: juara 2 (2004) untuk novel Saman karya Ayu Utami dan Juara 1 (2005) untuk novel Kembang Jepun karya Remy Sylado. Kemudian diam-diam mulai tergoda dan mencintai puisi. Beberapa puisinya pernah dimuat di majalah elektronik puisi nusantara: www.puisi.net. Sekarang ia akan melanjutkan studinya dalam Fashion Management di Lasalle-SIA College of the Arts, Singapura.
ini comment d mana aq stop baca puisimu...uda ga kuat....makin lama makin ga konsen...ngantuk soalnya...hahahaha...
btw, it's a really good poem, esp. this one... dari bawah sampe atas ini yg aq plg favoritin i think...
it's quite deep...and meanigful as well...
overall...all i can say is just that they're heartbreaking poems...
and i think kmu sukses menumpahkan rasa sakit hati k dalam puisi2 itu...
quite touching...and somehow its seems hurt...hahaha....
but i like all of them...except yg full of blood...ga sampe hati aq baca itu.. n yg spasang bola mata...
aq ga bilank aq ga suka...it's just the way u say it...seems quite scary...makes me feels uncomfy...hahahaha
but,for the last time...i just want to say...WELL MADE...^^
PS:puisi2 ini once again nunjukin banget kalo kamu orang yang introvert and mellow...hahaha^^
~~M